I need help tweaking and adding the last part of the project to this essay. I have attached the project guidelines and rubric as well as my rough draft I submitted. Please let me know if you need any other info. Below are the teacher’s comments on the rough draft submitted.
Introduction: Author/Artist: You’re off to a great start with your introduction, however, it’s essential to pick two works from the list; 1 work of art, and 1 work of literature, identify a theme and pick a Contemporary work, one that is made today and compare.
Introduction: Argumentation/Idea: Again, make sure to identify the necessary works of art and literature and identify a central theme.
Historical Background: Relationship:Make sure to create a description of the works and their relationship with the respective culture or origin.
Historical Background: Influence/Shape: Make sure to demonstrate how each culture’s traditions and ideologies influenced the artist in the creation of the works of art.
Similarities/Differences: Similar: Make sure to demonstrate the similarities between the works of art and the shared theme.
Similarities/Differences: Different: Don’t forget to explain the differences between the two works, and you’ve supported your assertions.
Similarities/Differences: Express: Also, make sure to explain how each work expresses the culture and historical setting, and provide examples.
Similarities/Differences: Represent: It’s also essential to explain how the similarities and differences represent the culture in which the works were made.
Modern influence: Expression: Make sure to demonstrate how these two works have had an impact on contemporary expression.
Modern influence: Influence or Define:Also make sure to demonstrate how the works continue to influence the contemporary culture.
Modern influence: Learn: Explore how the elements that can be learned from these works.
Modern influence: Echo: Don’t forget to identify contemporary examples that echo the theme.
Modern influence: Archetypes: Make sure to demonstrate how the works serve as archetypes for the common theme.
Modern influence: Parallels: Make sure to describe how the historic works parallel contemporary cultural expression.
Articulation of Response: Your submission has no errors related to spelling and grammar, syntax, or organization. Make sure to follow the MLA format, this is a big part of your grade. Let me know if you need help, or have any questions.
MAKE SURE TO USE MLA FORMAT THROUGHOUT YOUR PAPER.
Overall, fantastic work, just make sure to choose a contemporary work, and explore the theme as it relates to your choice of art and literature.